I Adopt A Son - Part 4
Author: Writer8322@aol.com
A Story Set in the Brave New World
of D.A.D.
and told by a son (Stuart Taylor)
Chapter 4: Cigars and Poker and Paddling
I read my Dad's part of the story, and I guess I agree with most
of it. Did you ever see the play "Rashomon," well
it's about these five people who tell the same story from their
own individual point of views, and - of course - each person's
story makes them look good.
My Dad, Michael Taylor, is a very honest man, so his stories are
as true as he can make them I just have a different point
of view. My point of view is that everything I did I did
for a reason, and the reason didn't seem bad to me.
I know that Dad forbid me to smoke, but I had a really strong
urge to see what it was like I guess I also wanted to see
if smoking his pipe made me feel like my Dad.
I didn't start out thinking I would like Michael Taylor, and I
sure didn't like it when he punished me my dad is
strict! But, he's also a really good man who loves me a
lot. I bet there's a billion other boys who don't have a
dad who always makes time to play with him, and help him with his
homework, and reads to him. My Dad always has time for me.
Dad has lots of friends, because the D.A.D.s and sons on the
Island get to do a lot of things together. Dad and I swam
almost every day and there were other D.A.D.s and sons we met at
the pool. We also got to go camping (there are whole
forests right in the Dome) and fishing and hunting and, as my
father told you, biking.
And once a month, Dad had a couple of friends come over with
their sons. The Dads sat at the dining room table, smoked
big cigars and played cards: Poker. We boys sometimes
played in my room or, if the D.A.D.s let us, we would go swimming
or bike-riding.
Sometimes when we were playing in my room, one of the sons would
get too wild and if his D.A.D. had to remind him to "Keep it
down!" too many times, the boy would get spanked. None
of the D.A.D.s seemed to worry too much about privacy when that
happened.
I remember one Dad, his name is Paul Campost, getting up from his
card-playing chair and grabbing his son who was laughing about
something and sounding like a big jack-ass.
"Seems like I told you three times to tone down that
volume," Mr. Campost said, as he grabbed his son Jerry and
put one foot up on his chair. Then he picked Jerry up under
the arms (and Jerry was BIG I thought he looked about
sixteen which could mean that he was really in his twenties) and
tossed him over his knee.
Jerry was big, but with his Dad's leg up on a chair that way, he
hung there and dangled like a sausage. I should say a
'skinned' sausage, because his father didn't lose any time
peeling down his britches and boxer shorts. Then his Dad
did something I hadn't seen or heard of before. I unbuckled
this big, thick leather belt he wore around his waist, and pulled
it out of the loops.
Boy, I sure paid attention when Mr. Campost did that! And
that belt looked bad I mean it looked like it would really
hurt!
Mr. Compost doubled the belt in his fist and said, "It's the
belt this time, son."
"Yessir, dad," was all big Jerry said, but I could see
how red his face was and that there were already tears in his
eyes. Personally, I thought the tears were from the
shame of being so big and still have your pants pulled down in
front of a whole crowd of Men and boys.
"And let's hope it does you some good. What do you
say, son?"
"Daddy, please will you spank me for my own good,"
Jerry obediently responded.
"Yes, son, I will!" Mr. Campost said and he swung that
strap the full length of his arm. It landed straight across
Jerry's backside with a terrible CRACK! Immediately,
a big wide, red stride appeared across Jerry's backside, but he
didn't make a sound. His whole body sort of 'jumped' on Mr.
Campost's knee, but Mr. Campost held Jerry by the back of his
neck with his left hand and Jerry was on his knee for good.....or
at least for as long as his father wanted him there.
He wanted him there a long time!
I'm trying to write this honesty, like my Dad did, so I have to
say that I had mixed feelings watching Jerry's big backside get
whupped. Part of me felt really bad for Jerry,
because he was big and this had to be killing his ego. It's
one thing to be a little boy and go over your Dad's knee, but
it's hard when you're getting to be big and a Man still reminds
you that your only a boy.
Another part of me loved watching Jerry 'get it.'
First of all, Mr. Campost looked just like a picturebook
lumberjack. He was a big man, bigger than my father, and he
usually wore jeans and a red and green plaid shirt with the
sleeves rolled up. He had thick red curly hair and a
full, bushy, curly red beard. With one of Dad's
cigars sticking out of the corner of his mouth, he looked
tough! And he swung that belt with no consideration of
Jerry's howls.
Oh yeah, Jerry had started out taking it quietly, but he didn'
end up like that. After about twenty wallops with his
father's strap, Jerry broke down and started crying, kicking and
begging.
"AH! Dad! Oh, please, Dad!"
CRACK! "Next time, when I tell you to lower your
voice, I guess you'll listen. That right, boy?"
CRACK!
"WOW! Baaaw! Yes SIR! Yes SIR,
daddy! STOP! PLEASE!"
CRACK!
"Did you ask me to stop, son? Did you?"
CRACK!
"Oh, oh, oh!" poor Jerry cried.
CRACK!
"What are you supposed to say, boy?"
CRACK!
"Aaaah! Oooh! 'Thank you daddy (sob), may I
please have another?"
"That's better, son. Yes, son, you may!"
CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!
I don't want to go on describing this scene 'cause Jerry might
see this someday and I think that even a boy deserves a little
privacy although the D.A.D.s would disagree and my Dad might even
given me a good spanking for writing this. Maybe I'll erase
this part later on.
Anyway, the reason I told about Jerry's strapping is to let you
know that after that happened, I resolved never to let that
happen to me. I was never going to give my Daddy a reason
to smack me in front of anybody else.
Then came the night of the video game!!
Dad was having three other D.A.D.s and their sons over, and he
and I had done a lot of preparation for the evening. Dad
had gotten two wooden boxes of very expensive cigars for the Men,
and he and I had made three six foot subs loaded with lettuce,
tomato, onions, cheese, turkey, salami, and peppers.
They were beautiful. In addition Dad had bought me a new
game for my video system it was one I really wanted and boy
did I give dad a big hug and kiss for that. He's the best!
While Dad was brushing my hair (of course I can do it myself, Dad
just likes to have me look a 'certain' way when we have company),
he reminded me about sharing the video.
"I know it's new, Stuart, and you've been waiting a long
time to play, but you know that you have to give everyone a
turn."
Dad held me by the chin and tried to brush down some stubborn
hair at the back of my head.
"Of coure I will, dad. I know that!"
Dad grinned. He spit into his palm and smoothed down the
stubborn hair it stayed.
Dad beamed at me. "There," he said, "you
look sharp!" He gave me a playful spank on my
bottom. "Now run outside and welcome people while I
get some ice ready."
The three D.A.D.s and sons who came that evening were:
1. Harry Rosen and his son Mitchell.
2. Vince Bianchiani and his son Vince, jr.
3. Dave Kelso and his son Dave-boy.
It's funny how Dads sometimes name their sons, isn't it, and the
effect it can have. Of course I'm adopted, but I sometimes
wished that my name was Michael jr. so I could feel even more
like my D.A.D.'s real son. I envied Vince jr. and Dave-boy
that they had their D.A.D.s' names and had even mentioned it,
maybe two or three times, to my Dad when he was putting me to
bed. Dad had kissed me on my head and said, "You are
my real son, Stuart. And if you don't believe it, I'll take
down your pajamas, put you over my knee and then you'll really
believe it!" Dad laughed and kissed my head again, but
I still thought it would be great to be Mike jr.
After the D.A.D.s and sons had all arrived, we boys stayed
outside for awhile playing 'catch' while the D.A.D.s sat around
chewing on their stogies and ......probably talking about US.
After awhile Mitchell, Dave-boy and Vince jr. all wanted to see
my new game, so we went upstairs to my house.
The Dads were all sitting around the card table now, under a
cloud of odorless cigar smoke, studying their hands. I
watched how the Men moved their cigars around the corner of their
mouths, the gold cigar bands glinting as they did, and wanted to
try it. Then, I remembered the day of the pipe and
surpressed the thought. Cigars, like Pipes, were for
Dads....not boys.
"Hey, son," Dad said around his cigar, "goin' to
try out the new game?"
"Yeah, dad," I said. "How's the game
going?"
Dad winked and chomped down on his cigar so that it went up at a
rakish 45 degree angle. I knew this meant that he had a
good hand. Unfortunately, Mr. Bianchiani saw and
started fussing with his hands. I knew an exit cue when I
saw one and quickly lead the boys into my bedroom.
The video game was called "Death Squadron in Devil's
Canyon" and I guess it was similar to lots of other
games. The player controlled a futuristic plane and
had to pilot it through a canyon filled with obstacles.
I loved playing this kind of game, though - to be honest - my
reflexes were only 'so/so.' Still the
visuals were dynamite and we were soon all enthralled and - like
my Dad had told me - taking turns.
It soon turned out that Vince jr. wasn't good at video games at
all, and he abandoned us to lay on my bed and throw a ball up
into the air. Mitchell preferred to be a spectator and
Dave-boy.....well, Dave-boy was incredible. I had never
played a video game with him, so I had no idea what his reflexes
were like they were lightning-fast.
While I struggled with obstacles and kept blowing up, Dave-boy
moved from level to level and his turns got longer and longer
until he was almost playing by himself.
"Hey, Stuart, what's the matter?" Dave-boy teased
when I had hit the canyon wall and vanished in a pryotechnic
display for the twentieth time. "Your fingers are like
jello. Here, let me show you how to do it. Watch me
carefully this time!" Dave-boy almost grabbed the controls
from my hand.....AND THAT WAS IT!
I knew what was happening to me when it started happening,but I
couldn't help it. I was ANGRY....angry, frustrated and
jealous.
"You think you're hot shit, don't you?" I flared.
Vince jr. stopped throwing the ball and everyone seemed to
freeze. Bad language was forbidden! If one of the
D.A.D.s had been in the room there would have been hell to
pay.....and some soap to eat too!!
Dave-boy only shrugged and grinned. "Take it easy,
sonny," he said. "You just need to grow into
it. Let a big boy show you how!"
"Never mind," I almost yelled. "Give me the
controls it's my fucking game!"
Dave-boy yanked the controls out of the game center and held it
up at arm's length.
For a few minutes he danced around my room with me dancing after
him. Since he was older and bigger than me, Dave-boy
could keep me jumping for it for quite a while....that is unless
I found another way to get it.
I found one.
In frustration, I hauled off and punched Dave-boy flat in the
nuts.
"OH!" he grunted and he folded up just like a paper
airplane. Dave-boy lay on my floor gasping for air and
clutching his offended nuts.
I grabbed the controls from his hands and, at that moment, my
bedroom door opened. Mitchell, my Dad, and the other three
D.A.D.s pushed in their cigars still clenched between their
teeth.
Mr. Kelso hurried to Dave-boy who was now biting his lip as tears
streamed downhis cheeks. My father grabbed my upper arms
and the controls fell to the floor. He looked into my face,
tongued his cigar to the corner of his mouth and said,
"What's going on in here, Stuart?!"
I looked from Dad to Dave-boy and couldn't think of a damn thing
to say but the truth.
"I...I hit him in the balls," I stammered.
"Why?" my father asked.
Again I felt frozen by the truth, besides what good would it be
to lie. I had hesitated too long and Dad gave me a little
shake.
"I asked you a question, son!" Cigar smoke
clouded from Dad's mouth.
"I got angry because......"
"Yes?!"
"Because Dave-boy was better than me and......" again I
froze, lost for the best words to use.
Mr. Kelso had helped Dave-boy up to a kneeling position and
Dave-boy was dash ing the tears from his eyes. He had
started to rally.
"I was raggin' on Stuart," Dave-boy said, his voice
sounded very constricted.
"He was teasing you and you hit him in his genitals?"
my father asked incredulously.
I felt completely miserable. This was arguably the worst
thing I had done since becoming Michael Taylor's son. I
nodded my head miserably.
"Did Dave-boy hit you?"
I shook my head and whispered, "No, Dad."
"He teased you about the game and you hit him for
that?"
Again I nodded.
"Is there anything else to the story?" Dad asked
me. I could feel that he was hoping that there was.
I shook my head and tried not to feel the eyes of all the Dads
and boys on me.
"Come over here to me!" Dad said angrily, he pulled me
over to the bed. He chomped on his cigar, shifting it to
the other side of his mouth. "Come over
here!"
Dad sat down on the bed and yanked me between his parted
knees. He held me by my wrists and looked at me
fiercely.
"You did something stupid and dangerous!" Dad
said. "You hit that boy in a sensitive spot for an
idiotic reason."
"I.....I'm sorry...." I turned my head in the
direction I thought Dave-boy might be in. "I'm sorry
Dave-boy....I...."
"I'm sorry I ragged on y ou Stu," Dave-boy's voice came
from my left. It sounded a bit better.
Dad pulled my wrists and the next thing I knew I was being pulled
around to his right side and lowered onto his lap. When I
fell across his knees, Dad parted his legs a little more so I
would be suspended there. He placed his right hand on the
back of my bottom and hoisted me into the proper position for a
good spanking.
Then Dad put his left hand on my head and his right hand across
the seat of my onepiece.
"You're going to be spanked and put to bed without
supper," Dad said sternly. "And tomorrow morning
you'll disconnect your video game system and put it in my
closet. You've lost it for two weeks!"
Dad unbuttoned the seat of my onepiece and took it down. My
behind was suddenly, coldly, displayed for my friends and their
fathers.
I turned my head in horrified embarrassment and saw them all
standing there watching. The boys stood in front of their
fathers their fathers' hands were on the boys'
shoulders. In a second anyone would have read the
scene my humiliating public spanking was going to serve as
an example for the other boys.
My Dad didn't care if he had an audience or if we were
alone. I could tell by his voice and his touch. His
D.A.D. training was operative, and he was performing a duty that
the situation demanded.
Dad had taken the cigar from his mouth and held it in his right
hand. I could feel the damp part that had been in his mouth
resting on my bare bottom.
"I'm ashamed of you, son," Dad said, his voice strong
and angry. "It's one thing to mess up on your
schoolwork or try smokin' one of your Dad's pipes, but to hit
another boy in his privates is unexcusable. I'm going to
give you a lesson your will never forget. And that is a
promise!"
With those words, Dad shoved his stogie back in his jaw and gave
me the first wallop across my behind.
Oh! It really hurt! Dad had put more into that first
spank then he ever had before, and it was quickly followed by
three others that left both sides of my backside stinging and
singing. You don't believe your backside can 'sing.'
Trust me, if my Dad made you go over his knees, and he yanked
down your pants and whopped your bare behind it would sing!
Now Dad began a methodical spanking landing his hand first on one
side and then the other. Sometimes he would spank the same
spot three or four times. When he did that, it hurt so
badly that I would cry out.
"Oh, Dad! Ow, please!"
"Are you sorry you hit Dave-boy?" Dad asked, never
letting up with his palm.
"Oh, yes. Yes, daddy. YES!"
"Are you ever, ever, ever going to strike someone like that
again?"
"Nooooo! No! oooh! No, I promise, Dad!"
Dad's hand moved up to the top of my behind and made it first
warm, then sore, then burning. Then his hand moved to
the sides of my backside and walloped them until they jumped and
danced and so did I on Dad's knee.
I tried to turn my head to appeal to my father...."Daddy!
Stop! OW! Stop! It hurts too much!
Oooooh!"
Dad took hold of my head and turned it back around and down.
"You mind your business, boy, and I'll tend to mine!"
Dad said.
He smacked away at the bottom of my behind, wacking the same red
spot until my legs scissored the air wildly and my arms flailed
in front of me. My head was pressed down, and I could
hardly see for the tears that kept welling up in response to the
incredible pain in my backside.
"Vince, would you do Stu the goodness of going into my
bedroom and getting my hairbrush?" Dad said.
"Sure thing, Mike," Vince replied and his voice
retreated.
THE HAIRBRUSH!! Oh God! No! I couldn't stand
Dad's hand anymore, much less the HAIRBRUSH.
Dad's hand was like a machine that was pounding something into
another shape. In fact it was. My backside was
swelling up under the continual spanking of Dad's mighty hand.
Now I was bawling loudly. I didn't care who heard me, I was
howling and begging.
"DAD! STOP! Baaaaaw! OW! OW! OW!
STOP!"
Vince returned with the hairbrush, and I vaguely heard Dad say,
in the voice of someone talking with a cigar in his mouth,
"Thanks!"
Then.
WHAP! WHAP! WHAP!
I screamed and thrashed as much as I could, but Dad was really
determined. "I'm gonna whale the tar out of you,
Stuart!"
He spanked away at my red, hot shiny bottom with the hairbrush as
though he were determined to teach it a lesson, as well as me.
I was frenzied. The hairbrush was more than I could handle,
and I became unglued. Dad held a roaring, kicking, bawling
litle kid over his knee and spanked the bejeezus out of him.
"Does it hurt?" Dad asked me, paddling the sides of my
bottom.
"YES!" I yelled.
"Good!" Dad yelled.
The fuss I was making seemed to have no impact on Dad he
had decided to bring me to a point I had never been to before.
In the midst of all the action, Dad decided that he needed to
change my position. So he took me, howling non-stop, and made me
straddle one of his legs. He pulled me up so that my feet
were off the ground and tucked the top half of me under his left
arm. This new position forced my legs apart and gave Dad a
new area for the hairbrush, my opened buttocks.
Dad walloped it with the hairbrush and I bawled my head
off. I had never yelled so loud or shed so many
tears. My face was drenched and my voice was almost
stripped.
"DADDY! DADDY! DADDY!" I bawled. I
didn't even have breathe enough for more than that. I just
howled and called it over and over.
"Will you, will you, will you, ever hit anyone like that
again!" Dad roared over my wails. He kept spanking my
open rectum and it seemed to swell out.
"No, Daddy!" I swore. And still my father
larruped me.
Finally, when my backside was nearly purple, the hairbrush
stopped and I was left limp and burning over my Dad's leg.
Dad must have made some kind of gesture, because without saying
anything the other Dads and sons filed quietly out of the room
and left our house.
Dad held me on his leg and gently rubbed my flaming hot behind
while I continued to emit heavy, heaving sobs.
Finally, Dad picked me up and held me in his big strong
arms. He walked the floor with me pressed to his chest, my
face laying sideways on his shoulder. I felt his right arm
across my shoulders and his left hand gently cradling my inflamed
bottom.
Dad carried me to the bathroom and ran a bath, never putting me
down. When the bath was full, Dad lowered me into it (I was
still crying) and gently gave me a warm, soapy bath.
During the bath I stopped crying and Dad spoke to me.
"That was a hard spanking wasn't it, son?" he asked.
"Yes daddy," I said. The spanking had reduced me
to what I really was anyway, a little boy.
"It hurt me to paddle you so hard, but you deserved it
Stuart."
I gave a silent sob, "Ye-es dad-dy."
"I want to show you something," Daddy said. He
left the room for a moment and then came back with a paper in his
hand. "Here," he said.
He tenderly dried my hand with a towel and put the paper into
it. It was the final adoption papers, all complete and
legal. It said:
This is to certify that Michael Taylor has been granted official
and legal fatherhood over one Michael Taylor, Jr. formerly Stuart
Hayden.
I read it and my eyes filled with tears once again.
"Do you mind, son?" Dad asked me. "Do you
mind taking my name?"
I held out my arms and, soaking wet though I was, my Dad gathered
me up and held me tight.
Now I was really and truly his boy.
THE END.